Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Tracy Sapkosky


15 comments:

  1. I think this could use a little more detail and also a bar code. I like the "hard at work" statement. I work at a staffing agency for nurses and they are always working hard.

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  2. This doesnt really look like a magazine cover to me. You forgot the barcode also as i did too

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  3. Definitely a good start. Like the others said a bar code is needed.

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  4. Also since it is a magazine cover a better resolution image.

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  5. I agree with this not looking like a magazine cover, the font is all wrong and the picture is blurry.

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  6. Not much to say...take the above comments into consideration.

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  7. Sorry but I agree with the other comments

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  8. It looks unfinished to me, like a photo was just captioned for fun. I could see it being maybe a brochure cover, but not necessarily a magazine. It could use a more definite nameplate and some article headlines.

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  9. You might want the image to be brighter? And I don't like the font being so elongated, it makes it hard to read.

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  10. I do agree with a lot of the other comments. The main image looks like it was left out in the sun for a while, and should be clearer.

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  11. Good start, but it is missing some elements.

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  12. Smiley photo for your image of a nurse...Unsure of which was the nameplate...add a couple more things but good concept

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  13. I think maybe the picture is blured to show the hetic life of a nurse and that they are always busy and not in one place.

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